Rewrote the H100 blind description to use better wording and to be

more in line with other descriptions from other DAPs. Also did some
touchups on the H300 description, along with some tiny little edits
to use better puncuation.


git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@19697 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657

1 files changed, 29 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
index e12bdb6871..b9da763e9f 100644
--- a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
+++ b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
@@ -23,25 +23,25 @@ described in detail in the following paragraph.
   
   %
   \opt{h100}{ 
-  If you put the \dap{} on a table with the joystick pointing 
-  towards you, and the curved sides at the top, you will find the following 
-  if you start from the top-right corner and follow the side of the \dap{} in a
-  clockwise direction:
-  On the right side the buttons \ButtonOn{}, \ButtonOff{}, \ButtonMode{} and
-  the \ButtonHold{} switch. Next comes the USB port on the bottom,
-  a small hole for resetting the \dap{}, then the charger plug. On the left
-  side is the \ButtonRec{} button. The top has a headphone mini-jack plug,
-  remote port, optical/line in and optical/line out connectors.
-  The joystick in the middle of the \dap{} is 
-  used to navigate menus by pressing it up, down, left and right. Pressing the 
-  joystick button is labelled \ButtonSelect{} throughout this manual. Its
-  directions are labelled \ButtonRight{}, \ButtonDown{}, \ButtonLeft{} and
-  \ButtonUp{}.
-  
-  The internal microphone is located on the left hand side of the nit towards the
-  top. As mentioned, there is a small hole on the bottom of the unit
-  between the power and USB sockets. You can hard-reset the device by inserting
-  a paperclip into this hole.}
+  Hold or lay the \dap{} so that the side with the joystick and LCD is facing 
+  towards you, and the curved side is at the top. The joystick functions as
+  the \ButtonUp{}, \ButtonRight{}, \ButtonLeft{}, and \ButtonDown{} buttons when
+  pressed in the appropriate direction. Pressing the joystick down functions as
+  \ButtonSelect{}. 
+  On the right side of the \dap{} are the \ButtonOn{}, \ButtonOff{}, 
+  \ButtonMode{} buttons, and the \ButtonHold{} switch. When this switch is
+  switched towards the bottom of the \dap{}, hold is on, and none of the other
+  buttons have any effect.
+
+  On the left side is the \ButtonRec{} button. Above that is the internal microphone. 
+
+  On the top panel of the \dap{}, from left to right, you can find the
+  following: headphone mini jack plug, remote port, Optical line-in, Optical Line-out.
+
+  On the bottom panel of the \dap{}, from left to right, you can find the
+  following: power jack, reset switch, and USB port. In the event that your
+  \dap{} hard locks, you can reset it by inserting a paper clip into the hole
+  where the reset switch is.}
   % 
   \opt{h300}{
   Hold or lay the \dap{} so that the side with the button pad and
@@ -49,10 +49,16 @@ described in detail in the following paragraph.
   left corner: \ButtonOn{}, bottom left corner: \ButtonOff{}, top right corner: 
   \ButtonRec, bottom right corner: \ButtonMode{}.  In the center of the button pad 
   is a button labelled \ButtonSelect{}.  Surrounding the \ButtonSelect{} button are
-  four directional buttons used to navigate up, down, left and right.
+  the \ButtonUp{}, \ButtonDown{}, \ButtonLeft{}, and \ButtonRight{} buttons.
   
   On the top panel of the \dap{}, from left to right, you can find the 
-  following: headphone mini jack plug, remote port, Line-in, Line-out. 
+  following: headphone mini jack plug, remote port, Line-in, Line-out.
+
+  On the left hand side of the \dap{} is the internal microphone.
+
+  On the right hand side of the \dap{} is the \ButtonHold{} switch. When this is 
+  switched towards the bottom of the \dap{}, hold is on, and none of the other 
+  buttons have any effect.
   
   On the bottom panel of the \dap{}, from left to right, you can find the 
   following:  power jack and two USB ports.  The USB port on the right is used 
@@ -527,10 +533,10 @@ The default directory structure that is assumed by some parts of Rockbox
 
 \subsection{The first contact}
 
-After you have first started the \dap{} you'll be presented by the
+After you have first started the \dap{}, you'll be presented by the
 \setting{Main Menu}. From this menu you can reach every function of Rockbox,
 for more information (see \reference{ref:main_menu}). To browse the files
-on you \dap{} select \setting{Files} (see \reference{ref:file_browser}), and to
+on you \dap{}, select \setting{Files} (see \reference{ref:file_browser}), and to
 browse in a view that is based on the meta-data\footnote{ID3 Tags, Vorbis
 comments, etc.} of your audio files, select \setting{Database} (see
 \reference{ref:database}).