Make changes to the gigabeat manual suggested by Alison Gravley and some other minor tweaks

git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@12072 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657

6 files changed, 52 insertions, 43 deletions

diff --git a/manual/configure_rockbox/system_options.tex b/manual/configure_rockbox/system_options.tex
index da24ff8ff4..1d8bfdc304 100644
--- a/manual/configure_rockbox/system_options.tex
+++ b/manual/configure_rockbox/system_options.tex
@@ -124,20 +124,20 @@ This sub menu relates to limits in the Rockbox operating system.
       This option turns \setting{On} and \setting{Off} the car ignition
       auto stop function.
   \begin{description}
-  \item [Car Adapter Mode: ]When using the \dap\ in a car,
-  \setting{Car Adapter Mode} automatically stops playback on the \dap\ when
+  \item [Car Adapter Mode: ]When using the \dap{} in a car,
+  \setting{Car Adapter Mode} automatically stops playback on the \dap{} when
   power (i.e. from cigarette lighter power adapter) to the external DC in jack
   is turned off. If the \setting{Car Adapter Mode} is set to \setting{On},
   Rockbox will pause playback when the external power off condition is
-  detected. Rockbox will then shutdown the \dap\ after the length of time set
+  detected. Rockbox will then shutdown the \dap{} after the length of time set
   in the \setting{Idle Poweroff} setting (see above).
   If power to the DC in jack is turned back on before the \emph{Idle Poweroff}
-  function has shut the \dap\ off, playback will be resumed 5 seconds after
+  function has shut the \dap{} off, playback will be resumed 5 seconds after
   the power is applied. This delay is to allow for the time while the car
   engine is being started.
   \end{description}
 
-  Once the \dap\ is shut off either manually, or automatically with the
+  Once the \dap{} is shut off either manually, or automatically with the
   \setting{Idle Poweroff} function, it must be powered up manually to resume
   playback.
 }
diff --git a/manual/getting_started/installation.tex b/manual/getting_started/installation.tex
index 5a5dc871a9..6e49a2bc50 100644
--- a/manual/getting_started/installation.tex
+++ b/manual/getting_started/installation.tex
@@ -143,30 +143,30 @@ software.
 
 There are three different types of firmware binaries from Rockbox website:
 \label{Version}
-current version, daily build and CVS build. You need to decide which one
+current version, daily build and SVN build. You need to decide which one
 you want to install and get the version for your \dap{}.
 
 \begin{description}
 
 \item[Current Version.] The current version is the latest stable release, free
-  of known critical bugs.  The current stable release of Rockbox, version 2.5,
+  of known critical bugs. The current stable release of Rockbox, version 2.5,
   is available at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/download/}.
   \opt{SWCODEC}{
     \note{The current stable release is available only for Archos jukeboxes.
-      There has not yet been a stable release for the \playername{}.  Until
-      there is a stable release for \playername{}, use a daily build or CVS
+      There has not yet been a stable release for the \playername{}. Until
+      there is a stable release for \playername{}, use a daily build or SVN
       build.
     }
   }
 
 \item[Daily Build.] The daily build is a development version of Rockbox. It
-  contains features and patches developed since last stable version.  It
+  contains features and patches developed since last stable version. It
   may also contain bugs! This daily build is generated automatically every day
   and can be found at \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}.
 
-\item[CVS Build (formerly, ``Bleeding Edge Build.'')] CVS stands for
-  ``Concurrent Versions System.'' CVS is the system that Rockbox
-  developers use to keep track of changes to the Rockbox source code. CVS
+\item[SVN Build] SVN stands for
+  ``Subversion.'' SVN is the system that Rockbox
+  developers use to keep track of changes to the Rockbox source code. SVN
   builds are made automatically every time there is a change to the
   Rockbox source. These builds are for people who want to test the code
   that developers just checked in.
@@ -176,16 +176,16 @@ you want to install and get the version for your \dap{}.
 \nopt{player}{
   \note{\index{Installation!Fonts}
     Rockbox has a fonts package that is available at
-    \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. While the daily builds and CVS
+    \url{http://www.rockbox.org/daily.shtml}. While the daily builds and SVN
     builds change frequently, the fonts package rarely changes.  Thus, the
-    fonts package is not included in the daily builds and CVS builds. (The
+    fonts package is not included in the daily builds and SVN builds. (The
     stable release, on the other hand, does not change, so fonts are
     included with the stable release.) When installing Rockbox for the
     first time, you should install the fonts package.
   }
 }
 
-Because daily builds and CVS builds are development versions which change
+Because daily builds and SVN builds are development versions which change
 frequently, they may behave differently than described in this manual, or
 they may introduce new (and maybe annoying) bugs. If you do not want to get
 undefined behaviour from your \dap{} you should really stick to the current
@@ -198,6 +198,13 @@ After downloading the Rockbox package connect your \dap{} to the computer via
 USB as described in the manual that came with your \dap{}. Take the file that
 you downloaded above, and extract its contents to your \daps{} drive.
 
+\opt{gigabeatf}{
+    \note{After you install Rockbox you must plug your USB
+         cable directly into the player. There is no cradle support at this
+         time.
+    }
+}
+
 Use the ``Extract all'' command of your unzip program to extract the files in
 the \fname{.zip} file onto your \dap{}. Note that the entire contents of the
 \fname{.zip} file should be extracted directly to the root of your \daps{}
diff --git a/manual/main_menu/main.tex b/manual/main_menu/main.tex
index d9040f70d9..ca1207d3ad 100644
--- a/manual/main_menu/main.tex
+++ b/manual/main_menu/main.tex
@@ -179,12 +179,12 @@ pages of information.}
 
 \begin{description}
 \item[Rockbox Info:]
-  Displays some basic system information.  This is, from top to bottom, 
-the amount of memory Rockbox has available for storing music (the buffer). The
-battery status. %
+  Displays some basic system information. This is, from top to bottom,
+  the amount of memory Rockbox has available for storing music (the buffer).
+  The battery status.
 \opt{ondio}{%
-Memory size and amount of free space on the two data volumes, this info is
-given seperately for internal memory (\emph{Int}) and for a plugged in MMC
+  Memory size and amount of free space on the two data volumes, this info is
+  given seperately for internal memory (\emph{Int}) and for a plugged in MMC
 (\emph{MMC}).
 }%
 \nopt{ondio}{Hard disk size and the amount of free space on the disk.}
@@ -203,25 +203,22 @@ given seperately for internal memory (\emph{Int}) and for a plugged in MMC
 
 \opt{player}{
   \section{Shutdown}
-  This menu option saves the Rockbox configuration and turns off the hard 
-  drive before shutting down the machine. For maximum safety this procedure 
+  This menu option saves the Rockbox configuration and turns off the hard
+  drive before shutting down the machine. For maximum safety this procedure
   is recommended when turning off the \dap. (There is a very small risk
   of hard disk corruption otherwise.) See \reference{ref:Safeshutdown}
   for more details.
 }
 
-\opt{RECORDER_PAD,IRIVER_H100_PAD,IRIVER_H300_PAD,IPOD_4G_PAD,IPOD_3G_PAD,IAUDIO_X5_PAD,IRIVER_H10_PAD}
+\nopt{PLAYER_PAD,ONDIO_PAD}
 {
 \section{Quick Menu}
-  Whilst not strictly part of the \setting{Main Menu}, it is worth noting that a few
-  of the more commonly used settings are available from the \setting{Quick Menu}.
-  The \setting{Quick Menu} screen is accessed by holding the 
-    \opt{RECORDER_PAD}{\ButtonFTwo}%
-    \opt{IRIVER_H100_PAD,IRIVER_H300_PAD}{\ButtonMode}%
-    \opt{IPOD_4G_PAD,IPOD_3G_PAD,IPOD_VIDEO_PAD}{\ButtonMenu}%
-    \opt{IAUDIO_X5_PAD}{\ButtonRec}%
-    \opt{IRIVER_H10_PAD}{\ButtonLeft}%
-  {} key, and it allows rapid access to the \setting{Shuffle} and \setting{Repeat} modes 
-  (\reference{ref:PlaybackOptions})
-  and the \setting{Show Files} option (\reference{ref:ShowFiles}).
+  Whilst not strictly part of the \setting{Main Menu}, it is worth noting that
+  a few of the more commonly used settings are available from the
+  \setting{Quick Menu}.
+  The \setting{Quick Menu} screen is accessed with \ActionStdQuickScreen
+  and exited with the same button.
+  It allows rapid access to the \setting{Shuffle} and \setting{Repeat}
+  modes (\reference{ref:PlaybackOptions}) and the \setting{Show Files}
+  option (\reference{ref:ShowFiles}).
 }
diff --git a/manual/platform/gigabeatf.tex b/manual/platform/gigabeatf.tex
index d84572a4f9..00488ab131 100644
--- a/manual/platform/gigabeatf.tex
+++ b/manual/platform/gigabeatf.tex
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@
 %Button actions, tree context
 \newcommand{\ActionTreeWps}{\ButtonPower}
 \newcommand{\ActionTreeStop}{\ButtonA}
-\newcommand{\ActionTreeEnter}{\fixme{Edit key}}
-\newcommand{\ActionTreeParentDirectory}{\fixme{Edit key}}
+\newcommand{\ActionTreeEnter}{\ButtonSelect{} or \ButtonRight}
+\newcommand{\ActionTreeParentDirectory}{\ButtonLeft}
 
 %Button actions, YesNo context
 \newcommand{\ActionYesNoAccept}{\ButtonSelect}
diff --git a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
index ed66058a1d..b5401e146f 100644
--- a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
+++ b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
@@ -13,7 +13,10 @@
 \end{center}
 
 Throughout this manual, the buttons on the \dap{} are labelled according to the
-picture above. In detail the buttons are described in the following paragraph.
+picture above. When a table of button actions says ``Long'' before the button it
+means that you should make a long press on that button, in other words, press it
+for approximately 1 second. In detail the buttons are described in the following
+paragraph.
 
 \blind{
   %
@@ -129,15 +132,17 @@ To turn on and off your Rockbox enabled \dap{} use the following keys:
       \opt{IRIVER_H100_PAD,IRIVER_H300_PAD}{\ButtonOn}%
       \opt{IPOD_4G_PAD,IPOD_3G_PAD}{\ButtonMenu{} / \ButtonSelect}%
       \opt{ONDIO_PAD}{\ButtonOff}\opt{RECORDER_PAD,PLAYER_PAD}%
-        {Hold \ButtonOn\ for 2--3s}%
-      \opt{IAUDIO_X5_PAD,IRIVER_H10_PAD,SANSA_E200_PAD}{\ButtonPower}%
+          {Hold \ButtonOn\ for 2--3s}%
+      \opt{IAUDIO_X5_PAD,IRIVER_H10_PAD,SANSA_E200_PAD,GIGABEAT_PAD}
+          {\ButtonPower}%
       & Start Rockbox\\
       \opt{IRIVER_H100_PAD,IRIVER_H300_PAD}{Hold \ButtonOff}%
       \opt{IPOD_4G_PAD,IPOD_3G_PAD}{Hold \ButtonPlay}%
       \opt{ONDIO_PAD,recorderv2fm}{Hold \ButtonOff}%
       \opt{recorder}{Double tap \ButtonOff\ when playback is stopped}%
       \opt{PLAYER_PAD}{From the Main Menu, select \textbf{Shutdown}}%
-      \opt{IAUDIO_X5_PAD,IRIVER_H10_PAD,SANSA_E200_PAD}{Hold \ButtonPower}%
+      \opt{IAUDIO_X5_PAD,IRIVER_H10_PAD,SANSA_E200_PAD,GIGABEAT_PAD}%
+          {Hold \ButtonPower}%
       & Shutdown Rockbox\\
     \end{btnmap}
 \end{table}
diff --git a/manual/rockbox_interface/playback.tex b/manual/rockbox_interface/playback.tex
index b905229ff3..3d345f73f9 100644
--- a/manual/rockbox_interface/playback.tex
+++ b/manual/rockbox_interface/playback.tex
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@ on the \dap{}.
       \ActionTreeParentDirectory & Go to the parent directory.\\
       %
       \ActionTreeEnter
-      & Executes an action. Depending on the file type, that action may vary.
-        (See \reference{ref:Filemenu}) \\
+      & Executes the default action on the selected file or enters a
+        directory.\\
       %
       \ActionTreeWps & If there is an audio file playing, returns to the
          \setting{While Playing Screen} (WPS) without stopping playback.\\