From 3a74208d4e5a67d86c4b1b978ebf5ecfb0347a55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thom Johansen <thomj@rockbox.org>
Date: Mon, 14 Jul 2008 22:47:40 +0000
Subject: General language cleanup and small restrucuring of the source code of
 misc. parts of the manual.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@18043 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657
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 manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex | 29 ++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex')

diff --git a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
index c637268fa2..c4b9e35835 100644
--- a/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
+++ b/manual/rockbox_interface/main.tex
@@ -12,37 +12,36 @@
 
 \end{center}
 
-Throughout this manual, the buttons on the \dap{} are labelled according to the
-picture above. When a table of button actions says ``Long'' before the button it
-means that you should make a long press on that button, in other words, press it
-for approximately 1 second. In detail the buttons are described in the following
-paragraph.
+Throughout this manual, the buttons on the \dap{} are labeled according to the
+picture above. Whenever a button name is prefixed by ``Long'', a long press of
+approximately one second should be performed on that button. The buttons are
+described in detail in the following paragraph.
 
 \blind{
-  Additional information is available for blind users on the Rockbox website at 
+  Additional information for blind users is available on the Rockbox website at 
   \wikilink{BlindFAQ}.
   
   %
   \opt{h1xx}{ 
-  If you lay the \dap{} on the table with the joystick pointing 
+  If you put the \dap{} on a table with the joystick pointing 
   towards you, and the curved sides at the top, you will find the following 
   if you start from the top-right corner and follow the side of the \dap{} in a
   clockwise direction:
   On the right side the buttons \ButtonOn{}, \ButtonOff{}, \ButtonMode{} and
-  the \ButtonHold{} switch. Next comes on the bottom the USB port,
-  a small hole for resetting the \dap{}, charger plug. On the left side located
-  is the button \ButtonRec{}. At least the top has headphone mini-jack plug,
-  remote port, optical/line in and optical/line out.
+  the \ButtonHold{} switch. Next comes the USB port on the bottom,
+  a small hole for resetting the \dap{}, then the charger plug. On the left
+  side is the \ButtonRec{} button. The top has a headphone mini-jack plug,
+  remote port, optical/line in and optical/line out connectors.
   The joystick in the middle of the \dap{} is 
   used to navigate menus by pressing it up, down, left and right. Pressing the 
-  joystick down is labelled \ButtonSelect{} throughout this manual. Its
+  joystick button is labeled \ButtonSelect{} throughout this manual. Its
   directions are labelled \ButtonRight{}, \ButtonDown{}, \ButtonLeft{} and
   \ButtonUp{}.
   
   The internal microphone is located on the left hand side of the nit towards the
-  top, and there is a small reset hole on the bottom of the unit between the 
-  power and USB sockets.  To perform a hard reset, insert a paperclip into this
-  hole.}
+  top. As mentioned, there is a small hole on the bottom of the unit
+  between the power and USB sockets. You can hard-reset the device by inserting
+  a paperclip into this hole.}
   % 
   \opt{h300}{
   Hold or lay the \dap{} so that the side with the button pad and
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