From 1e634f902000a36c92974c91a23b21092e1de417 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alex Parker <rockbox@aeparker.com>
Date: Sat, 24 Oct 2009 19:29:32 +0000
Subject: Improve English in the codebuster manual entry.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@23333 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657
---
 manual/plugins/codebuster.tex | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'manual/plugins/codebuster.tex')

diff --git a/manual/plugins/codebuster.tex b/manual/plugins/codebuster.tex
index 791e29f8a5..aa9c660e55 100644
--- a/manual/plugins/codebuster.tex
+++ b/manual/plugins/codebuster.tex
@@ -2,11 +2,12 @@
 \subsection{Codebuster}
 \screenshot{plugins/images/ss-codebuster}{Codebuster}{img:codebuster}
 
-Codebuster is a clone of the classic mastermind game. Your aim is to guess the
-computer's combination in a minimal number of attempts. At every turn, you input
-a combination, which is then validated by the computer, which displays the number
-of well-placed and misplaced pegs (a red square for right ones, and a white square
-for misplaced ones).
+Codebuster is a clone of the classic mastermind game. The computer selects a
+random combination of coloured pegs and the aim is to guess the correct combination
+in the smallest number of moves. After each attempt to guess the combination the
+results are displayed in the form of red and white pegs.  A red peg signifies
+a correct peg in the correct position, and a white peg signifies a correct
+peg in the wrong position.
 
 \begin{table}
   \begin{btnmap}{}{}
@@ -21,7 +22,7 @@ for misplaced ones).
         {\ButtonSelect}
     \opt{IAUDIO_X5_PAD}{\ButtonRec}
        \opt{HAVEREMOTEKEYMAP}{& }
-        & Validate suggestion and move to next line \\
+        & Check suggestion and move to next line \\
     \ButtonLeft\ / \ButtonRight
        \opt{HAVEREMOTEKEYMAP}{& }
         & Select a peg \\
-- 
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