From 10d0344e296eeb9259e9b609bb9b656ba1d7e42a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Thom Johansen Date: Thu, 13 Dec 2007 22:51:27 +0000 Subject: FS #8315 and FS #8316, plus some of my own small changes. Pretty much just minor language rewrites. git-svn-id: svn://svn.rockbox.org/rockbox/trunk@15919 a1c6a512-1295-4272-9138-f99709370657 --- manual/getting_started/iaudio_install.tex | 2 +- manual/getting_started/installation.tex | 2 +- manual/getting_started/main.tex | 2 +- 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'manual/getting_started') diff --git a/manual/getting_started/iaudio_install.tex b/manual/getting_started/iaudio_install.tex index 774006f567..cdab94b925 100644 --- a/manual/getting_started/iaudio_install.tex +++ b/manual/getting_started/iaudio_install.tex @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ \fixme{This is merely a copy of the wiki page IaudioBoot, so this section needs a more natural language and also error checking by Iaudio owners.} -The \playername{} has a builtin boot loader which performs the +The \playername{} has a built-in boot loader which performs the firmware update, and can also access the hard drive via USB. Therefore the Rockbox bootloader can be very minimalistic, without USB mode. This also makes it less dangerous to install the Rockbox bootloader, as you can diff --git a/manual/getting_started/installation.tex b/manual/getting_started/installation.tex index 33a4a71dc5..459f3523cc 100644 --- a/manual/getting_started/installation.tex +++ b/manual/getting_started/installation.tex @@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ use. } \section{Updating Rockbox} -Even if you don't use Rockbox Utility for updating Rockbox it's easy. +Updating Rockbox is easy even if you don't use the Rockbox Utility. Download a Rockbox build. (The latest release of the Rockbox software will always be available from \url{http://www.rockbox.org/download/}). Unzip the build to the root directory diff --git a/manual/getting_started/main.tex b/manual/getting_started/main.tex index 6eb8b3b754..595c9b17a2 100644 --- a/manual/getting_started/main.tex +++ b/manual/getting_started/main.tex @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ This is the manual for Rockbox. Rockbox is an open source firmware replacement for a growing number of digital audio players. Rockbox aims to be considerably more functional and efficient than your device's stock firmware while remaining easy to use and customisable. Rockbox is written by users, for users. Not only -is it free to use, it's also released under the GNU public license, which means +is it free to use, it is also released under the GNU public license, which means that it will always remain free both to use and to change. Rockbox has been in development since 2001, and receives new features, tweaks -- cgit v1.2.3